Wednesday, September 23, 2009

unknown temptations

far far away,

in no man`s land,

my heart sways,

my mind flays,

as i stray, in the unknowns.


there she is,

sitting all by herself,

waiting for a word,

when none came.


there she is,

with her eyes wet,

munching on chocolates,

for reasons unknown,

to me.


there she is,

an assiduous student,

a charismatic soul,

peerless in her beauty,

from within.


did i hurt her?

did i miss something?

can i , ever be forgiven?

perhaps , no.


here am i,

sitting on a rock,

under the bright blue sky,

the vast green fields before me,

the river bristling with life,

flowing along my side,

the wind wispering in my ears,

all alone and mesmerized,

by her thoughts.



here am i,

with nothing in everything,

with no one in everyone,

just by void, by my side.


here am i,

on the clouds,

searching for her,

and lo , there she is ,

smiling at me,

but alas, i am not here.

i am in no man`s land.

and i will die in this place.

21 comments:

  1. Awesome man... I didn't knew you had this quality also. But really it's very nice. And btw who is she... ?? :)

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  2. cooool stuff yaar....kisiko suna doonga too....;)
    sahhiii hai yaar........dis "" romantic"" side of jaspal 4 d first time....kisne shaayar banaya...

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  3. Awesome yaar!! seems like there's gonna be a Dead Poets Society here in IIIT too.... :)

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  4. this is wat "SHE" can do with men.... everything out here is for greed...... life is a great journey leaving alone .... as we say "sab moh maya hai" , seems tune bhi sab kuch tayag diya hai...... enjoy this ride in no man's land and be a saviour of yur dreams....... god bless u dear.......

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  5. Dead Poets Society huh......seems like you want to suck the marrow from life...
    Well Jaspal I never thought you would write a romantic poem like this one...perhaps I misjudged ....great poem...go on so that we may enjoy more of your great talent.

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  6. This song fits best on U jassi ...

    Main Shaayar to nahi ...
    Magar Aye haseen ...
    jabse dekha , maine tujhko , mujhko
    Shaayari .... Aaaa gayi ... :D

    Its first time to see this side of ur personality

    Great Yaar :)

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  7. sir kiske liye likhi gai hai!!!
    unko sunate to kabhi chor ke nahi jati:)
    kya senti mari hai.......

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  8. Nice poem sir. Ladki ke liye hai ki CG ke liye? :-P

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  10. ITS REALLY NICE!!!
    AND THE BEST PART OF THIS POEM IS THAT IT ACTUALLY MADE MY GOOSE BUMPS STAND
    KEEP IT UP
    WE WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT

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  11. kya baat hai jaspal .... i noticed that u looked dreaming and bothered bout some girl the complete last week , but i din knew tat u really were ..... and this is the result .... okey now u have to tell us the name of that girl .... bt i must say ..... awesome dude .... continue ur gud work .....

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  12. Keep up the gr8 work.... n do me a favor... help me get a topic from somewhere.....

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  13. awesome ......... soothing effect....

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  14. Paaji always felt u had a poetic side to u but man that friend of urs is either drivin u crazy or u just felt like showing ur craft work....

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  15. omg.. i knew u hd a romantic side(as opposd to many) bt never xpected it to take the form of poetry... gd work dude... btw temptations r nt really unknown ryt..(at least i think i know the temptations..) :)

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  16. awesome man :) really cool ..... .. hey do me a favor , i need a similar one. i need it desperately ..... just compose one more....

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  17. d best1 i thnk..gud work..nt much of a poet myslf..kip up d show.

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  18. mind blowng............jst luvd it

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