in the silence of thunder ,
the darkness of lightening ,
the stillness of hailstorm ,
in the company of unknowns ,
i walked on.
in the closeness of virgin path ,
the stillness of time ,
the sorrows of happiness ,
in the emptiness of the mind ,
i walked on.
battered , bruised , impaired ,
not a speckle of fair skin ,
nor a fabric to cover ,
soles peeling apart thyself ,
the fingers numb ,
the chilly wind lashing ,
against the sombre face ,
hard , brumal , adamantine ,
flinty cold in the chest.
i tottered on.
towards ,
the only light , i had ever seen ,
the only feeling , i had ever felt ,
the only happiness , i had ever pursued ,
the only path , i had ever dreamed of ,
towards , the bereaved.
at last ,
when i could ,
neither breathe , nor feel ,
from my deepest core ,
summoning all that was there ,
i spread my arms like an eagle ,
fell on the knees like a worshipper ,
raised my head towards the eternal sky ,
and i saw , with my frozen eyes ,
the beautiful white moon ,
beneath the dark ghostly clouds.
i thought ,
i smiled ,
i fell.
and then they came ,
hordes , never seen before.
to feast , to relish , to gulp.
the skin was peeled , meticulously ,
the blood was sucked , hastily ,
the flesh was devoured , slowly ,
the bone was licked , greedily ,
but it was , elusive as ever.
so on , they went ,
peeled , sucked , devoured and licked.
alas , no where , was it to be found ,
and so , satan was send for.
yet he too , had a hard time ,
could not find the prized dime ,
i was laughing all the time ,
for the bloody morons in chime.
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ReplyDeletePoem uses beautiful imagery, and the rhythm gets a beautiful going but some facts are wrong(that is if I am interpreting it right)... which I think is the only stain on an otherwise spotlessly classic poem.....
ReplyDeleteKeep 'em coming..... :)
the first stanza s awsm.. :) though i think i missed d theme...
ReplyDelete"Could not find the prized dime"....So what is this prized dime
ReplyDeletewell-expressed....
ReplyDeleteYaar main kya kahun... in every poem of yours itni hard to angrezi likhta hai... jo bhi hai tere is naye feature se atleast I am able to get your whole poem... Still classic one man... too good... hope u can tell me how u r able to get these themes from... :)
ReplyDeletefirst para is impeccable, great use of oxymoron. But try to balance : building on imagery and conveying the theme. I think it becomes a bit obscure when you are delving in building the imagery too much.. Otherwise a classic
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