under the starry night ,
with the moon bright white ,
walking with the road ,
the two were abode.
neither said a word ,
for they were a bird ,
keen to fly high ,
in the beautiful sky.
not beguiled by looks ,
for they were not crooks ,
smiling , blushing , caring ,
for all they were , all the while.
desired to say something ,
desired to hear something ,
but for the shyest ,
didn't open the closet.
at strike of two ,
slept like logs , did thou?
old time shall tell ,
oops , did i just hear them yell?
Readers , please suggest a tittle. Could not think of any other. BTW , someone wanted a really simple poem and I gave it a try.
ReplyDeletei think the title is apt considering the fact it is suggested by someone...
ReplyDeletea gud one!!!
ReplyDeleteNice one... Although I don't think that the title kept by you is appropriate. Again in the poem you are not able to express all the feelings, you are mainly talking about the surroundings or the quite night.
ReplyDeleteLove the para that tells about the desires... keep writing ...
very nice....
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